EDITING SAMPLE

In this before and after sample, you can clearly see how the edited text flows well, delivers information in a clearer fashion, and is generally an improvement upon the original text.

Unedited Original Text

Arkansas bird watching provides a plethora of opportunities for watching the state's 400 plus species of birds. Additionally, many bird watching enthusiasts enjoy spending time seeking but over 155 native species of butterflies as well. Arkansas is an ideal destination for domestic bird watching adventures for several reasons.

There a multitude of prospects for Arkansas bird watching. There are over 400 documented species of birds in the areas that surround the Ozark Mountains. In addition to the birds, there are also a large variety of butterfly species that inhabit the state, creating additional opportunities for premium wildlife viewing.

The first, and probably the most practical reason is that it is affordable. Since Arkansas is centrally located within the United States, it is, with a few exceptions, just about a days drive from anywhere in the country. This kind of access, coupled with the low cost of living in the area, makes a trip affordable. If you are coming from out of state or from the East or West coast, you will be delighted at the hospitable nature of the people who call the state of Arkansas home.

Another reason to consider Arkansas as your next bird watching destination is the availability of local resources. A bird watching club is easily found and there are Audubon societies in the area, and most are ready and willing to provide information that will allow visitors to capitalize on all of the bird watching opportunities that an area has to offer. If you are serious about heading to Arkansas to do some bird watching, make sure you check out www.birdingArkansas.com. Here you will find a number of resources and links that will help you plan your trip.

Arkansas bird watching recently made headlines around the world when the Ivory Billed Woodpecker, long though to be extinct, was discovered living in the swamps of Arkansas. These sightings have led to resurgence in wild life awareness in the area and have increased the number of tourists and bird watching enthusiasts in the area.

Bull Shoals State Park, DeGray Lake Resort State Park, and Devil's Den State Park each host bird watching festivals or events throughout different times of the year. These organized festivals and events allow bird watching enthusiasts from around the country to come together and share information and to enjoy the company of folks who share similar passions. Local bird watching club involvement is very active in supporting these events.

In addition to the festivals, some lodges and outfitters sponsor Arkansas bird watching tours. These tours can be a good way to go if you are unfamiliar with the area and want to be assured of the best opportunities to see rare species. The guides who lead the tours will have the latest and most up to date information about where the birds have been seen and will know the best ways to get there. Guided tours give you the chance to focus on bird watching and allow you to leave the driving to someone else.

Edited Text

Arkanas provides a multitude of prospects for bird watching. There are over 400 documented species of birds in the areas that surround the Ozark Mountains. In addition to the birds, there are over 155 native butterfly species that inhabit the state, creating additional opportunities for premium wildlife viewing.

Arkansas is an ideal destination for domestic bird watching adventures for several reasons. As Arkansas is centrally located within the United States within a day's drive from most of the country, the need for expensive travel is reduced. Out-of-state visitors are delighted by the hospitable nature of the people who call the state of Arkansas home, as well as the low cost of rental housing and accommodation.

Another reason to consider Arkansas as your next birdwatching destination is the excellent network of local resources. Birdwatching clubs and Audubon societies are easily found, and most are ready to provide information that will allow visitors to take advantage of the birdwatching opportunities that an area has to offer.

Arkansas birdwatching recently made headlines around the world when the Ivory Billed Woodpecker, long thought to be extinct, was discovered living in the swamps of Arkansas in 2004. These sightings have led to a resurgence of wildlife awareness and an increase in the number of birdwatching enthusiasts in the area.

Birdwatching events are hosted by Bull Shoals State Park, DeGray Lake Resort State Park, and Devil's Den State Park at different times of the year. These organized festivals and events allow birdwatching enthusiasts from around the country to share information while enjoying the company of people who share similar passions. These events are actively supported by local birdwatching clubs and societies.

Some lodges and outfitters sponsor Arkansas birdwatching tours. A tour is a good choice for the birdwatcher who is unfamiliar with the area and wants the best opportunities to see rare species. Guides who lead the tours will have the latest and most up-to-date information about where the birds have been seen and how to reach that area. Guided tours give visitors the chance to focus on birdwatching while allowing someone else to handle transportation.

If you are serious about heading to Arkansas to do some birdwatching, make sure you check out www.birdingArkansas.com. This site will provide you with a number of resources and links to help you plan your trip.

(c) A. Murphy 2007.

Where to next?

Writing Services page

Editing Services page

Portfolio page

Curriculum Vitae page

Writing Bio page.